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CommentsThis is amazing! The coloring is so beautiful! I love the perspective and how you did the shading.
-- formerly =Cloverbud-Warsong ~la la lal a la it goes are the world~ loving the Asian aesthetic! Your warm blues and reds are gorgeous in tandem, but perhaps the gold items might have a bit of specular shine and polish to them to separate them a little from other matte surfaces? The figure also blends a little with the background colour; perhaps something could be done to pop the figure a little more? Otherwise, I'm enjoying the bright spot on the ball and the warm undertones, you have a wonderful looseness and skill with bright, saturated colours!
I can't write an official critique but I can still give you one in the comments
I really like the color use, and the shading is very good. I would suggest though that you try to expand the value range some lighter lights and darker darks (the ball as someone else mentioned is doing a great job at sticking out, while the rest of the figure is disappearing a bit into the background). The shading right now leads to some visual confusion in the whole body because it is not as strong as it is for the head and hands. The ball is so bright it's sucking the eyes strait to it, making it hard to travel around the picture, and with such a nice round movement for the composition that is a pitty because the figure and cloth work is great. |
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