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SYNC Manga Series.
Act.1 , Page 1 Page 01 | [link] . Page 02 | [link] . Page 03 | [link] . Page 04 | [link] *Any advice is welcomed. Update Text corrected. SE added. Sized to 1200x1200 for easier reading. *Thank you very much everyone! If it can be better, please don't hesitate to tell me! Well, it's finally begin. As you see, I dropped the almost finished sketch for Enka's story, but pick Mu's story again. The background information is greatly changed from my early works, please consider this one as the correct version. Since the story is heavily depends on the background information, I will integrate them into the page. To keep the quality continuous to my illustrations, the manga is fully colored, and I'm actually new to composing, this won't be a quick and regular series. *HELP* 1. Dialog revision is welcomed. 2. Is there is anybody can help me with the proper words for sound effects? Comments AH this looks promising, I still adore your coloring
and character style <33 and I love the format this is drawn in can't wait for the next page c: -- THIS SIGNATURE IS SIMPLY FABULOUS, IN AMERICA -icon by Anarchpeace c:-  Aww, cute ^^
er.. sound effects? Hope you don't mind a link... [link] I hope that helps. If not, go to your local store and flick through comic books with a note book. Write down all the ones you see. You can't get in trouble for that. ^^ Best of luck! -- I'm not suffering from insanity, I'm enjoying every minute of it! ^_^   I agree with Heilos ^^
also, if you like i can try and help with dialog and sound effects -- some people are like slinkys; they don't really surve any perpuse but always bring a smile to your face when you push them down a flight of stairs.  I will help you with sound effects. ^_^
-- |_| (. .) _ Wtf!? |_|>  A wonderful first page
 -- "I'll just leave the colour off this one shall I?"  omg! finally!!haha i'm glad you made up your mind and did mu's story! i can not wait until the next page comes out!! it's awsome!
-- Renashugo is just.... your FACE! EERRRRRHHHH SNAP!!! do you need some tape for that burn?!!   i just love how the page blends into each others,
im exited to see more of this story^^ -- "An artist is someone who produces things that people don't need to have but that he - for some reason - thinks it would be a good idea to give them". ~Andy Warhol  ooh this is looking nice so far. glad to finally see some sequentials from you.
As for help...The dialogue here is looking quite good. There are a few things in the background info that stand out to me however: "...old-type cyborg that still uses an outdated exoskeleton..." "He is a pika motif." do you mean that his design is based off of a pika? "...Mu works for CELEX as a delivery boy." "...CELEX stands for Celerity Express, suggesting it can..." In the section "Human" human should be pluralized - "humans" rather than just "human" "...the former humans are categorized as..." hope that helps! |
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