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-Planetary Memories- Most of you may be confused by the different look of Cloud in every picture, so I made a variation sheet of Cloud for you. Cloud has a lot of forms, it's only some of them in this picture. CommentsIf there was ever only one aspect of your work that I admire, it would have to be your creative ability with variations. (Or forms, in this case, there are many compliments I could give for each, but I'll keep this short.) Whether it's your own design or one belonging to someone else, you have the gift to take a concept and improve upon it tenfold. Indeed, a favorite.
-- ~mcfabulous27 ~kixtg =Stacatto *DoNotDelete =martyisnothere ~JelliedFox ~C-Wisher ~Vivache ~Kintall =Zeurel ~Adrianfd Wow! I mean, I guess I expected a form for turning into a vehicle or something XD too much Transformers! @_@ regardless, all the possible useful forms I can think of are there, so fantastic job! I'd say the Floating Arms are my favorite of all the forms! One thing I want to ask; what happens to the rest of her mass during a transformation? I mean, if she must lose weight to immitate a smaller animal or something? Your characters are so fascinating! Here's another I wanna draw! Though they keep coming too fast for me to draw them =_=;
-- Fighting, stealing, and killing can\'t be the right path to peace! Unlock the Tikal within you (c) to Tikalessence |
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Critiques
The ONLY thing I can think of that needs work is how the text is done. It's legible, but it kind of hurts my eyes to read with the light colors being used. I also realize that you used those colors to match Cloud's color scheme, and that's alright but maybe you can put something darker just around the text to help it stand out. Perhaps just a darker shade of grey will do the trick.
Aside from that one little nit-pick, the character came out very nicely and I would love to see more of him in the future. Maybe next time you could share a little of his backstory as well. I'm sure many people would love to hear it.
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