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-Planetary Memories-

Most of you may be confused by the different look of Cloud in every picture, so I made a variation sheet of Cloud for you. Cloud has a lot of forms, it's only some of them in this picture.

Critiques


:iconlanmana:
Once again, You've come up with a very creative character design! All of Cloud's forms have their own unique features, and I find them all appealing and well done.

The ONLY thing I can think of that needs work is how the text is done. It's legible, but it kind of hurts my eyes to read with the light colors being used. I also realize that you used those colors to match Cloud's color scheme, and that's alright but maybe you can put something darker just around the text to help it stand out. Perhaps just a darker shade of grey will do the trick.

Aside from that one little nit-pick, the character came out very nicely and I would love to see more of him in the future. Maybe next time you could share a little of his backstory as well. I'm sure many people would love to hear it. :)
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:iconreeanimated:
omg, adorable, the only word that comes to mind!
+fave

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beLIEve [to] me like you do.
:iconragchow:
Very cute! Simple! I love it!

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The World's Most Way Past Cool Deviant!
:iconspartanjedi:
ya know
i was really trying to avoid those big words
words like electrolysis
also. first comment

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:iconcrazy-chesh:
Many times when you design a character it's hard to understand how the various forms for that character work, so this is a very good explanation! Each form is very creative.

I like the Balloon and Winged Runner forms.

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:iconnerdiousmaximous:
XD this is amazing i love the balloon and the boat forms hehehe ^^ great designs and unique ideas i love this =D

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Spazz noob Hidan, a quote of sorts - pffft who am i kidding this is just a LOL sentence XD

"Pretty please Kakuzu-chan? With a cherry and sugar on top?"

kawaii, ne? ^^
:icondreilex:
If there was ever only one aspect of your work that I admire, it would have to be your creative ability with variations. (Or forms, in this case, there are many compliments I could give for each, but I'll keep this short.) Whether it's your own design or one belonging to someone else, you have the gift to take a concept and improve upon it tenfold. Indeed, a favorite. :+fav:

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:iconxelaalex:
Wow! I mean, I guess I expected a form for turning into a vehicle or something XD too much Transformers! @_@ regardless, all the possible useful forms I can think of are there, so fantastic job! I'd say the Floating Arms are my favorite of all the forms! One thing I want to ask; what happens to the rest of her mass during a transformation? I mean, if she must lose weight to immitate a smaller animal or something? Your characters are so fascinating! Here's another I wanna draw! Though they keep coming too fast for me to draw them =_=;

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:iconkirakura:
I dunno why but i find this one amazing!!

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:iconzorrino:
It would be nice to see it larger.

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